Friday, June 22, 2012

69. Goldilocks: The Real Story

Bear
Always sexy, appealing
She waited until his wife and son left  
Before coming over
To visit


They made up elaborate lies

To appease suspicious spouses,    

Then rendezvoused again in the woods later.  

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trifecta writing challenge:  retell a story in 33 words
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19 comments:

  1. Bruce MillerJune 22, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Now that's a RE-telling alright! Spicy and clever!

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  2. JennaJune 22, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    i agree !! great job!

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  3. Gloria GrandyJune 22, 2012 at 12:44 PM

    Your 33 words immediately caught my attention as I was looking through the blogs for something to read today. Too, too awesome. I smiled and laughed outloud!!

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  4. AnonymousJune 22, 2012 at 2:00 PM

    That's great! Perfect pics and instead of summarizing as I did, you tell a true retelling.

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  5. vanhayduJune 22, 2012 at 2:58 PM

    can i rewrite a retell? nice job indeed.

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  6. HannahJune 22, 2012 at 3:10 PM

    Very nice!! Great twist on an oldie but goldie!! hehe!

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  7. AnonymousJune 22, 2012 at 6:34 PM

    Haha that's great! Very nice retelling of a classic story :)

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  8. DanaJune 22, 2012 at 8:06 PM

    Love it!

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  9. barbaraJune 22, 2012 at 9:27 PM

    aha!!! I knew Goldi was naughty! :)

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  10. OldDogNewTitsJune 22, 2012 at 10:21 PM

    The pictures complement the story well. Nice.

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  11. Faith CohenJune 23, 2012 at 1:08 AM

    Very well done!

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  12. AnonymousJune 23, 2012 at 4:57 AM

    Thanks for linking up with Trifextra this weekend. I love your creative re-telling of the classic here. That picture of the bear is perfect.

    Hope to see you back on Monday to help us celebrate our 33rd week.

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  13. LibbyJune 23, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    Good one! Really creative!

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  14. AmeliaJune 23, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    Awe. Some.

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  15. ElGuapoJune 24, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    wonderful! Now I have to go reread all of Grimm to find the subtext...

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  16. AnonymousJune 25, 2012 at 6:49 AM

    Right up there with Abe Lincoln Vampire Hunter ;)
    Well done, thanks for sharing!

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  17. CandiceJune 26, 2012 at 4:33 PM

    Goldilocks likes her some dark meat, eh?

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  18. a.eyeJune 28, 2012 at 12:37 PM

    Awesome version!

    Stop by my blog for the award I'm giving you.

    http://1219sibmtt.blogspot.com/2012/06/liebster-award-goes-to-me.html

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  19. Linda RoyJuly 6, 2012 at 8:00 PM

    This is so creative and delightfully twisted!

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