Wednesday, July 4, 2012

70. anatomy of a crush

her touch felt new,
her words seemed true,

the intensity with which they loved
made him feel like he’d been drugged 

but in the end, he went berserk
their relationship:  just emotional fireworks

trifecta writing challenge:  33 words about fireworks


  1. It's been a long time...but I remember a relationship like that. Nicely penned.

  2. I do too. Well done.

  3. Nice poem. I've been there once upon a time.

  4. your poem reads very well. such intense emotion does eventually burst, pity it can't in a more positive way

  5. V e r y N i c e. L o v e Y o u r S t y l e. L o v e Y o u r B l o g T i t l e.

  6. Oh...been on both ends of this one! It truly is a powerful drug!

  7. I can really relate to this. Very nice.

  8. Emotional fireworks. Nice job with the prompt! Your ending is particularly strong this week. I think lots of us can relate to this one.


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