Wednesday, June 20, 2012

68. Blue


I come here when I’m depressed.  The clouds dip down, caressing the sea.  I linger, soothed by the architecture of God.  When I finally leave, I’m lighter—not rosy, but no longer blue. 

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trifecta writing challenge:  the word is "blue," the story is 33 words. 

7 comments:

  1. This reminds me of the famous "Footprints"

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  2. Nice! I like the description 'not rosy, but no longer blue.'

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  3. That last line is so perfect. Beautifully done.

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  4. perfect place to reflect
    wish i lived closer to the beach!

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  5. This spot could lift a lot of blueness from me. Thinking and meditation often does and the setting here is the key!

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  6. Thanks so much for linking up with Trifecta this week. I really liked "architecture of God." This is a really pretty piece of writing.

    Hope to see you back soon.

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