I come here
when I’m depressed. The clouds dip down,
caressing the sea. I linger, soothed by
the architecture of God. When I finally leave,
I’m lighter—not rosy, but no longer blue.
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trifecta writing challenge: the word is "blue," the story is 33 words.
Refreshing!
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the famous "Footprints"
ReplyDeleteNice! I like the description 'not rosy, but no longer blue.'
ReplyDeleteThat last line is so perfect. Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteperfect place to reflect
ReplyDeletewish i lived closer to the beach!
This spot could lift a lot of blueness from me. Thinking and meditation often does and the setting here is the key!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for linking up with Trifecta this week. I really liked "architecture of God." This is a really pretty piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteHope to see you back soon.