Friday, June 22, 2012

69. Goldilocks: The Real Story

Bear
Always sexy, appealing
She waited until his wife and son left  
Before coming over
To visit


They made up elaborate lies

To appease suspicious spouses,    

Then rendezvoused again in the woods later.  

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trifecta writing challenge:  retell a story in 33 words

20 comments:

  1. Now that's a RE-telling alright! Spicy and clever!

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  2. Your 33 words immediately caught my attention as I was looking through the blogs for something to read today. Too, too awesome. I smiled and laughed outloud!!

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  3. That's great! Perfect pics and instead of summarizing as I did, you tell a true retelling.

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  4. can i rewrite a retell? nice job indeed.

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  5. Very nice!! Great twist on an oldie but goldie!! hehe!

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  6. Haha that's great! Very nice retelling of a classic story :)

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  7. aha!!! I knew Goldi was naughty! :)

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  8. The pictures complement the story well. Nice.

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  9. Thanks for linking up with Trifextra this weekend. I love your creative re-telling of the classic here. That picture of the bear is perfect.

    Hope to see you back on Monday to help us celebrate our 33rd week.

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  10. wonderful! Now I have to go reread all of Grimm to find the subtext...

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  11. Right up there with Abe Lincoln Vampire Hunter ;)
    Well done, thanks for sharing!

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  12. Goldilocks likes her some dark meat, eh?

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  13. Awesome version!

    Stop by my blog for the award I'm giving you.

    http://1219sibmtt.blogspot.com/2012/06/liebster-award-goes-to-me.html

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  14. This is so creative and delightfully twisted!

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