Bear
Always sexy,
appealing
She waited
until his wife and son left
Before coming
over
To visit
To appease suspicious spouses,
Then rendezvoused
again in the woods later.
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trifecta writing challenge: retell a story in 33 words
Now that's a RE-telling alright! Spicy and clever!
ReplyDeletei agree !! great job!
ReplyDeleteYour 33 words immediately caught my attention as I was looking through the blogs for something to read today. Too, too awesome. I smiled and laughed outloud!!
ReplyDeleteThat's great! Perfect pics and instead of summarizing as I did, you tell a true retelling.
ReplyDeletecan i rewrite a retell? nice job indeed.
ReplyDeleteVery nice!! Great twist on an oldie but goldie!! hehe!
ReplyDeleteHaha that's great! Very nice retelling of a classic story :)
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteaha!!! I knew Goldi was naughty! :)
ReplyDeleteThe pictures complement the story well. Nice.
ReplyDeleteVery well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up with Trifextra this weekend. I love your creative re-telling of the classic here. That picture of the bear is perfect.
ReplyDeleteHope to see you back on Monday to help us celebrate our 33rd week.
Good one! Really creative!
ReplyDeleteAwe. Some.
ReplyDeletewonderful! Now I have to go reread all of Grimm to find the subtext...
ReplyDeleteRight up there with Abe Lincoln Vampire Hunter ;)
ReplyDeleteWell done, thanks for sharing!
Goldilocks likes her some dark meat, eh?
ReplyDeleteAwesome version!
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This is so creative and delightfully twisted!
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