I love the humor. He's a weirdo, but maybe we'll sleep together.
I second that. Twisted. I like twisted.
Twisted is my middle name. Or maybe it's Frances.
Ah, the medical school syndrome--obsessed by the subject, but perhaps not all the time.
that is the direction I was going-- attracted to the future earning potential..............
It makes me remember that ALL first dates are weird. Why not have skulls? Grin.
and job interviews are weird too. maybe she's on a job interview?
Go with it! Dentists make the big bucks. ;o)
I loved this! I like the humor in this piece.
Ha! How very sexy. I loved when new dates tried to impress me with something...odd. Though, admittedly, none showed me a dead person's teeth.
If you had two more words to use ..."I think?" would end this well. At least that is what my mind added all by herself. Yes I am talking about my mind in the third again. Stop. :) Great piece MOV! As usual!
Rachel, I cannot believe you wrote that. You are psychic. My first draft started with the words, "I thought it was weird ..." and then I changed weird to odd and then when I was all done, 35 words. I finessed it as best I could, almost got rid of the "at least", but in the end, realized that the only fat I could trim was the "I thought." I was hoping that since my character was saying it, it was implied.
Very cute story. Have several friends who are dentist. My best friend dated her eventual husband through dental school so this could be their reality. Fun interpretation.
thanks, gina! the girl in the photo just looks so cheerful and young and innocent. seemed like a fresh and new relationship, still trying to impress one another.
Very fun. Especially how she likes that they're in the right place.
ha! I know! :)
MOV, you win the award for prescience. The woman in this photo is, indeed, a dentist. :-) Thanks for linking up with this clever and intuitive response. See you on Monday for the weekday challenge!
Congratulations! I'm just reading all the otehr entries now. Yours is hilarious!
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