Saturday, August 17, 2013

106. Just a Simple Poem


Who came before
Who will be here after
Beyond the green door
We share familiar laughter

Nature reaches out
She whispers, never shouts
She holds me in her embrace
Kisses your angel face
 
MOV
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trifecta writing challenge/ 33 words about a nature photo
 
 

12 comments:

  1. "Beyond the green door" loved these words. I think it is more than a simple poem, MOV. It cradles Human Nature in Mother Nature's arms and shows how our species is self-recycling.

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    1. Thank you, Shawn. Your kind words mean a lot.

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  2. Nature reaches out, she whispers,never shout - so true and profound.

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  3. Very nice. Like a very light stroke of the brush, this piece.

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  4. MOV,

    This is so soft and lovely. Sometimes simple poems have great impact. Well done!

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  5. This has a nice, joyous feel to it. Thank you for linking up. Please remember to come back and vote!

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  6. I love this. It makes me stop and think about who came before me, and who will come after-and I find I have tears in my eyes:)

    Sentimentally sweet, and so well done!

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  7. I hope you don't reference to the film "the green door"... a great poem all the same.. sweet and sentimental.

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  8. This is beautiful. Nature's ways are usually subtle.

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  9. "...she whispers, never shouts..." This is a beautiful concept. Great piece!

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