Who
came before
Who will be here after
Beyond the green door
We share familiar laughter
Who will be here after
Beyond the green door
We share familiar laughter
Nature
reaches out
She whispers, never shouts
She holds me in her embrace
Kisses your angel face
She whispers, never shouts
She holds me in her embrace
Kisses your angel face
MOV
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trifecta writing challenge/ 33 words about a nature photo
"Beyond the green door" loved these words. I think it is more than a simple poem, MOV. It cradles Human Nature in Mother Nature's arms and shows how our species is self-recycling.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Shawn. Your kind words mean a lot.
DeleteNature reaches out, she whispers,never shout - so true and profound.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Like a very light stroke of the brush, this piece.
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ReplyDeleteThis is so soft and lovely. Sometimes simple poems have great impact. Well done!
A beautiful piece.
ReplyDeleteThis has a nice, joyous feel to it. Thank you for linking up. Please remember to come back and vote!
ReplyDeleteI love this. It makes me stop and think about who came before me, and who will come after-and I find I have tears in my eyes:)
ReplyDeleteSentimentally sweet, and so well done!
I hope you don't reference to the film "the green door"... a great poem all the same.. sweet and sentimental.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. Nature's ways are usually subtle.
ReplyDelete"...she whispers, never shouts..." This is a beautiful concept. Great piece!
ReplyDeleteSimple and sweet. Love it. :)
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