Friday, March 23, 2012

26. Bingo Goes To The Beach

The trifecta instuctions said something about completing the story that was started with 33 words with 33 of my own.  I give you their 33 words SCRAMBLED and mixed with my own 33 words.  A slight deviation from their intention (I'm sure), but fun nonetheless.  Read on:  
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He tilted his head out the car window, staring past behind him instead of ahead like most dogs.  “You’re so cute!” said the voice heartily.  His fur ocean-wet and matted, yet he never disagreed.  She made every decision.  Bingo was nothing without her, no discussion about it.  And privately he knew it.  “There’s home!”  Bingo indicated delight, his wag a register of more love than ever.    

   
    
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17 comments:

  1. Laura AsheMarch 23, 2012 at 2:52 PM

    Unconditional love at it's best. Very creative way to use the prompt this week!

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  2. loverofwordsMarch 23, 2012 at 2:54 PM

    Most original entry, harder to write but you did it. This has to get a special award.

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  3. dunce twoMarch 23, 2012 at 3:48 PM

    Way to color outside the lines. Woo-hoo! Happy Friday!

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  4. RachelMarch 23, 2012 at 4:37 PM

    I loved this! Very creative.

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  5. Jester QueenMarch 23, 2012 at 5:44 PM

    I'm suitibly impressed. It takes control to fit 33 specific words into a different order and work them into a fresh story.

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  6. AmeliaMarch 23, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    Very sweet, I like the point of view.

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  7. GinaMarch 23, 2012 at 8:25 PM

    MOV....How very clever. I'm green with envy!

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  8. AnonymousMarch 23, 2012 at 10:20 PM

    I'm impressed. Way to bend the rules and color outside the lines and make it work!

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  9. AnonymousMarch 24, 2012 at 6:05 AM

    This was an excellent take on the challenge and was very creative!

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  10. Nicole Leigh ShawMarch 24, 2012 at 8:05 PM

    clever! And fun. I dig it.

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  11. LibbyMarch 25, 2012 at 8:43 AM

    How creative!! I love that you scrambled the words!

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  12. Kim at Let Me Start By SayingMarch 25, 2012 at 11:08 AM

    Nice switching it up! Woof.
    Came from the Trifextra linkup.

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  13. AnonymousMarch 25, 2012 at 3:26 PM

    Ha! Very sweet. Nothing wrong with breaking the rules every now and then. (See my own "Later That Morning.")

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  14. karenMarch 25, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    Rebel!

    Seriously (and obviously), given the title of your blog, this is so very perfect. I take what you do as inspiration to not always follow The Rules, so thank you. (My sisters and I laugh at what consummate rule followers we are ... and how great things could be if only we'd loosen up.) Great write.

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  15. MOVMarch 26, 2012 at 2:43 AM

    thank you so much to all of you who read my piece(s), and especially thank you to those who took the time to write a comment. your words mean a lot to me!!!

    best,
    MOV

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  16. Hold my hand: a social worker's blogApril 7, 2012 at 4:21 AM

    Excellent!

    Doris

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