Saturday, March 10, 2012

22. Come Back To Me

Hans was the child we thought we’d never have.  We endured fertility treatments for eight years before getting pregnant.  Tom was watching him that day, when the ball rolled in the street.  “Hans!”   

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  1. What is that called between your collar bones and under your chin. Nice write.

  2. Oh, man! Why did you do that to me? Nicely done.

  3. Oh, I wasn't expecting that! Great twist in the final line. Thanks for linking up (three times!) and hope you'll be here for the weekday challenge.


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