I always thought she was a sleaze.
She
approached my boyfriend when we were 20,
hit him up for sex and money.
He went with
her, he did, it’s truehit him up for sex and money.
(that’s just something he would do).
I can’t
blame him, she was hot,
Ballerina body, nice and taut.
He came back
to me, after timeBallerina body, nice and taut.
(Cheating is bad, but not a crime).
We almost
got married, he bought me a ring,
but I broke up with him, here’s the thing:
That
graceful girl he liked so much?but I broke up with him, here’s the thing:
She responds to a woman’s touch.
Mine, to be
specific.
Do I think
she’s sleazy, now years later?After I had a chance to actually date her?
We’re still
together, I love her a lot.
(And yes, I think she’s still quite hot.)
(And yes, I think she’s still quite hot.)
MOV
(oh, fiction is so fun!!!)
(oh, fiction is so fun!!!)
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trifecta writing challenge, the word is "grace"
Fun indeed.
ReplyDeleteI am smiling in appreciation.
What's good for the goose is good for the gander?
ReplyDeleteWhat's good for the gander is better for the goose apparently :)
DeletePoetic justice of a sort?;-)Loved it :D
ReplyDeleteOh YEAH!
ReplyDeleteBrilliance :) Well played lady well played.
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Didn't see that coming--which makes this piece even more fabulous. It flows so well and was a blast to read. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWell that took an unexpected turn! I'm still not sure if I should feel bad for the boyfriend or not, ha!
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I like the twist. It's very funny.
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