Saturday, September 14, 2013

111. Right on Target


I adore your pristine aisles
Products arranged precisely
Obsequious clerks in red and khaki
Even a Starbucks to tempt me
But mostly I love your prices
I return every week
Loyal customer forever
 
 
MOV
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trifecta writing challenge/ exactly 33 words/ apostrophe (addressing a separate entity almost like a person)
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20 comments:

  1. brudbergSeptember 15, 2013 at 3:29 AM

    AH,.. this was a fun Apostrophe... BTW.. is it really linked??

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    1. MOVSeptember 15, 2013 at 3:32 AM

      I think so, I tried it going there, and coming back. I hope it is linked! thanks, Bjorn.

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  2. Proactive IndianSeptember 15, 2013 at 4:43 AM

    Nice verse explaining why you're right on Target every week!

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  3. TMWHickmanSeptember 15, 2013 at 5:32 AM

    LOL! I can so relate! I never come out of that store without a shopping bag in my hand.

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    1. MOVSeptember 15, 2013 at 5:33 AM

      Why is that?????? Maybe the bull's eye logo makes us spend money...

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2013 at 6:17 AM

    This is very innovative.

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  5. The Gal HerselfSeptember 15, 2013 at 6:26 AM

    What a great use of 33 words. Really! I thought it had to be much, much longer because you got so much in. Nicely done.

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2013 at 6:33 AM

    This is such a creative take on the prompt. Well done!

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  7. LaTonya BaldwinSeptember 15, 2013 at 7:28 AM

    Funny. Sounds like my sister. Enjoyed.

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  8. AtreyeeSeptember 15, 2013 at 11:02 AM

    Let's go shopping-yay!Love this fun take MOV:-)

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  9. kymmSeptember 15, 2013 at 2:10 PM

    Very funny. I've heard of these stores, but never been to one. Pristine aisles does sound tempting, though!

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  10. GinaSeptember 15, 2013 at 3:17 PM

    You're humor is right up my alley! Target makes the most ordinary things look enticing I can't refuse!

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2013 at 6:54 PM

    Nicely done. Wish we had one in my town. I'm jealous.

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  12. TrifectaSeptember 15, 2013 at 6:58 PM

    I'm a Target girl all the way. This was a fun piece:)

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  13. JannaTWritesSeptember 15, 2013 at 8:56 PM

    I love Target...but unfortunately, there isn't one in my town anymore. I visit them whenever I can, though :)

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  14. IvySeptember 15, 2013 at 8:59 PM

    It's not your fault, dear. Target is the George Clooney of general merchandise stores. Those big gorgeous red SALE signs make me swoon.

    Really enjoyed this fun take on the prompt! :)

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2013 at 9:18 PM

    Ha! Target is one of my guilty pleasures, especially since having kids. :)

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2013 at 11:12 PM

    This is great and fun. Love your descriptions.

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2013 at 7:02 AM

    Hahaha! Target lovers unite!

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