Saturday, September 14, 2013

111. Right on Target


I adore your pristine aisles
Products arranged precisely
Obsequious clerks in red and khaki
Even a Starbucks to tempt me
But mostly I love your prices
I return every week
Loyal customer forever
 
 
MOV
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trifecta writing challenge/ exactly 33 words/ apostrophe (addressing a separate entity almost like a person)

20 comments:

  1. AH,.. this was a fun Apostrophe... BTW.. is it really linked??

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    1. I think so, I tried it going there, and coming back. I hope it is linked! thanks, Bjorn.

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  2. Nice verse explaining why you're right on Target every week!

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  3. LOL! I can so relate! I never come out of that store without a shopping bag in my hand.

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    1. Why is that?????? Maybe the bull's eye logo makes us spend money...

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  4. What a great use of 33 words. Really! I thought it had to be much, much longer because you got so much in. Nicely done.

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  5. This is such a creative take on the prompt. Well done!

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  6. Funny. Sounds like my sister. Enjoyed.

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  7. Let's go shopping-yay!Love this fun take MOV:-)

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  8. Very funny. I've heard of these stores, but never been to one. Pristine aisles does sound tempting, though!

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  9. You're humor is right up my alley! Target makes the most ordinary things look enticing I can't refuse!

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  10. Nicely done. Wish we had one in my town. I'm jealous.

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  11. I'm a Target girl all the way. This was a fun piece:)

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  12. I love Target...but unfortunately, there isn't one in my town anymore. I visit them whenever I can, though :)

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  13. It's not your fault, dear. Target is the George Clooney of general merchandise stores. Those big gorgeous red SALE signs make me swoon.

    Really enjoyed this fun take on the prompt! :)

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  14. Ha! Target is one of my guilty pleasures, especially since having kids. :)

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  15. This is great and fun. Love your descriptions.

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