Friday, October 19, 2012

87. Winners



When we met, you were married.  I wished for you.  I won. 

You met someone else.  She wished for you.  She won. 

I shot you dead.  I was acquitted.  Guess I win again.     
 
 
 
 
 
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trifecta writing challenge:  three wishes with high consequences (33 words)

11 comments:

  1. Yikes! Short, and to the point. And a whole story in 33 words. Great job!

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  2. Not just putting LOL...I am truly LAUGHING OUT LOUD. Justice is a beautiful thing...even in 33 words.

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  3. What goes around comes around for that dude! Perfect!!!

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  4. uh no. now i gotta worry about dating that chick ;-) nice answer to the prompt

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  5. I love this. Sums up certain chapters of my life. Without the murder bit!

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  6. WOW. Perfect capture of the three wishes with strings. WOW

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  7. Two out of three is very good in the wish department. Very uplifting in a grim sort of way.

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  8. I never considered the high consequence might actually work out in the wisher's favour, I like that. Sometimes my head is so far inside the box, the bottom bulges. Great story! and ... whoops!

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  9. So many different possible outcomes for similar wishes. *ducks*

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