The brown bunny:
a soft pet for Josh,
a sweet companion for me when Josh died,
and dinner for Mike after another bitter fight.
(I would not have eaten it had I known.)
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trifecta writing challenge: 1 object, 3 ways, 33 words
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That was a rollercoaster ride! Very nicely written.
ReplyDeleteToo many demands on such a poor little innocent bunny. :)
ReplyDeleteOh, wow, didnt see that ending coming. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteDark days, yo. I LIKE it!!!
ReplyDeleteAwww poor bunny but he lived a good life. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteYikes! I didn't see that coming. good job.
ReplyDeleteOH NO!! Poor bunny :(
ReplyDeleteThis is sad! First the child dies, then she unknowingly eats the bunny. I like the unexpected turn of events, though :)
ReplyDeleteOh the poor bunny, surprise ending, not expected! Good job!
ReplyDeleteI told Mike to give up eating rabbits damn him!!! Good job Mov :0 maybe just salads this weekend :p
ReplyDeleteOuch. Didn't see that coming! Brown Bunny turned Browned Bunny.
ReplyDeletehmm your poem was a little gamey like the meal? bit wild tasting i mean In a good way :-)
ReplyDeletePoor brown bunny! A suprise of an ending indeed!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Yyyyouch. Mike sounds like a serious Fatal Attraction kind of a Daddy.
ReplyDeleteI like how you brought us full circle from sweet to sad and left us with the funny.
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up with us again. We hope to see you back tomorrow for the new challenge.
My neighbor is trying to persuade me to add a bunny to our collection of 2 dogs, 2 cats, 2 fish and a hamster to "round things out" for the hamster. I told her I'd take it only in a casserole dish.
ReplyDeleteProblem solved.