Nobody is
home at the next house, so I search through the keys until I find the right
one. Red key, blue key, green key. Jim helped me put the colored dots on
them. I hear the dog barking
inside. I open the door and he lunges at
me, leash already in his mouth.
The third
dog, small and fang-faced, I do not like.
He bit me once, and I worry that he’ll do it again. I tell him he’s a good dog, but it’s a
lie.
I instinctively
reach in my jacket pocket to make sure I remembered the plastic bags. I checked before I left my apartment, but I
can’t exactly remember if that was today or yesterday. What if I forgot the bags? That would be bad.
I walk the
dogs down the street, a tangle of wagging tails and furry legs. They pull on their leashes, stop near some bushes,
bark at a squirrel.
We are on a
shady path that winds through buildings and toward a park. I smile at other people with dogs, and I
wonder if they think all three dogs are mine.
Three dogs! Who would own
three!
I like my
job. I like that I can think when I walk
and no one will demand anything from me.
I look up at the sky and feel the fresh air on my skin. It feels good to be outside.
My mother told
me this was the only job I was qualified for, I don’t know what she meant by
that. She said it right before she got
on her flight back to Montreal. Dana,
you will always be a dog walker. You are
too stupid to do anything else.
I think she must
have meant it in a nice way.
The second
dog has to poop, so he stops at the edge of the sidewalk and squats. I wait.
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trifecta writing challenge: the word is "flight", my word count is 333 words
Crisp, energetic and unexpected. Loved this! :D
ReplyDeletePoor Dana, I'm afraid she just doesn't get it. But, hey, her mom doesn't seem like a winner, either. Anyway, you've got me worried whether she brought the plastic bags. Fun story.
ReplyDeleteDana has a mental disability. I was trying to imply that without being too too obvious. Dana's mother is unnecessarily cruel, and also frustrated with Dana's limitations. I would not want to be Dana, but I would really not want to be the horrible person that is Dana's mom. She just seems uncaring and mean.
DeleteThink of Dana like a female Forrest Gump. There is a lot of good in Dana, even if she does not have a genius level IQ.
Thanks for pointing out how I missed the boat, or plane, so to speak. I stick with my point about this being "fun", because I enjoyed the fact that she liked her job and had identified with the stress of having to worry about what I would do if I forgot the plastic bags. I've been there :)
DeleteI would have 3 dogs if my husband would allow it :)
ReplyDeleteGood story.
excellent bit of writing. Totally gripping and enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteLovely dog walker story! Reminds me of the King of Queens when the dog walker walked the old dad who lived in the basement. He didn't wear a leash and not really sure if he carried his own bag or not.
ReplyDeleteI'm sad for Dana. I understood her to be mentally disabled but I am appalled by her mother. Sad. I hope she finds simple happiness in her job.
ReplyDeleteLove that she loves her job even though the one dog bit her, the twist with the mom was perfect to give us that challenge to get the story, bravo Mov good reads :))
ReplyDeleteI chuckled at the part where she told the dog he was good, but it was a lie. I'm not sure how a parent could be that mean to their child, but there's a lot of stuff in this world that I can't comprehend. Good for her for enjoying her job and the freedom of fresh air...and for giving her mom the benefit of the doubt when she didn't deserve it.
ReplyDeleteNice dog-walker, anyone that loves dogs is a wonderful person even if she has a nasty, stupid mother. GREAT writing! So well done.
ReplyDeletegreat story - I love the amount of personality that shines through just with basic thoughts about the dogs, and how she's reacting to them. I think if I had someone in my life as nasty as her mom, I'd rather just think the best of things anyways.
ReplyDeleteI heard a story about a lawyer who quick the high paying job to start her own dog walking business. Sometimes you gotta do what you love :)
ReplyDeleteOh. I want to smack her mother! I get that Dana may be slow and have issues, but come on! How can a parent do that! Great job painting that picture.
ReplyDeleteNice story, unnecessarily cruel mother. I do actually know people with 3 dogs. We have had 2 at one time. :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is really good stuff. I liked the understatement, and I enjoyed the bit about lying to the dog. Good job with the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThat actually doesn't sound like the worst job in the world; seems like Dana's life isn't so bad even given her limitations.
ReplyDeletethanks to all for your wonderful comments! I came in 3rd on the challenge. :)
ReplyDeleteAw, what an adorable, special kid. Too bad her mother is the worst.
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