her words seemed true,
the intensity with which they loved
made him feel like he’d been drugged
but in the end, he went berserk
their relationship: just emotional fireworks
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trifecta writing challenge: 33 words about fireworks
Wednesday, July 4, 2012
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It's been a long time...but I remember a relationship like that. Nicely penned.
ReplyDeleteI do too. Well done.
ReplyDeleteNice poem. I've been there once upon a time.
ReplyDeleteyour poem reads very well. such intense emotion does eventually burst, pity it can't in a more positive way
ReplyDeleteBeen there. Well written!
ReplyDeleteV e r y N i c e. L o v e Y o u r S t y l e. L o v e Y o u r B l o g T i t l e.
ReplyDeleteOh...been on both ends of this one! It truly is a powerful drug!
ReplyDeleteI can really relate to this. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteEmotional fireworks. Nice job with the prompt! Your ending is particularly strong this week. I think lots of us can relate to this one.
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