Sunday, October 27, 2013

116. Do You Know This Beast, Too?

My Beast beckons at dawn
with siren song,
I succumb to her magic
(It’s quite tragic)

Smells draw me in
Caffeine’s my sin.
I go there daily,
she squeals gaily:
“Welcome to Starbucks!”

MOV
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trifecta writing challenge/ an unusual beast in 33 words
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 27, 2013 at 2:43 PM

    ooh, I can smell the beast too :) Enticing are those crushed beans, the brand new cup with frothing deliciousness, and encompassing it all the sign on the road. It sure takes you in.

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  2. AtreyeeOctober 27, 2013 at 2:45 PM

    Such acute poem-love your take MOV:-)

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  3. Jo-Anne TealOctober 27, 2013 at 3:05 PM

    Coffee is no beast! It's an angel! :))) Nice write!

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  4. Valerie BoersmaOctober 27, 2013 at 4:32 PM

    I go to bed each night dreaming of the next morning's coffee.

    "Caffeine's my sin."

    I want that on a tee shirt!

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  5. TrifectaOctober 27, 2013 at 9:55 PM

    The most delicious beast in town.

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  6. OKinUKOctober 29, 2013 at 12:26 PM

    A siren song, to be sure.

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