Homework on the table
The smell of burnt noodles
Muddy shin guards
Littering the floor
Phone ringing
Laughter
Bickering
Legos built
Dog barking
We live in a house
of love
trifecta writing challenge: a poem in 33 words
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That was really very good! And, those are great images that describe the sights, smells, and sounds of home.
ReplyDeleteI really like this! It sounds a lot like my house. :)
ReplyDeleteLove the picture, it goes well with your poem.
ReplyDeletelove! (except for the legos part . . . hurts my feet still to think of stepping on one, right in the middle of my arch - ouch!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing! That sounds exactly like our house.
ReplyDeleteIt almost looks like a shape poem. I enjoyed the family imagery. But I agree with Barbara about the legos!
ReplyDeleteThe senses, the senses, I think you got them all. A house with a family attacks them all at once, so this captured that perfectly.
ReplyDeleteCame from Trifextra.
You captured this well!
ReplyDeleteNot a single thing wrong with that.
ReplyDeleteLoved it. Each image is very precise and poignant. Well done on the challenge this week!
ReplyDeleteOMG...takes me back to the chaos a few years ago in what was my life with 3 kids! Nicely done and also a great picture :)
ReplyDeleteHappy 3 Day Weekend!
Love it
ReplyDeleteWhat a cute picture. :)
ReplyDelete"The smell of burnt noodles" ... So true.
This sounds oh-so-familiar, except for the "dog barking" part. :-)
ReplyDelete~Imelda
Thank you so much for linking up to Trifextra this weekend. The challenge this weekend will be judged by the community. So please come back to the Trifecta home page and click the stars next to the three posts you most enjoyed. You only have until Monday at 8 am EST, so hurry!
ReplyDeletei love the trifecta challenges! you're doing great with them!
ReplyDeletesweet poem =)